My+Name

My name means the leader of littles ones as an Indian would say. I look out for my siblings. I am the eagle watching over the bunnies and protecting them from the dangers of life. My Mom gave me this name because she said it flowed well. My name comes from the nickname of John from England. I am the only Jack in my entier family. I think my name fits my me pretty well but not like its exatly me. I wouldn't change my first name but I would change my last name. Hinchsliff. It's just so long. I would change it to Johnson. My name is like a jack in the box. Unexpected, surprise. My name is literally translated to cat in spanish. Gato.

Voice- Good job but i don't see any attitude which is good. Word choice- nice but add some more maybe. Figurative language- great job but again add more. Inference- his name is interesting.